A Matter of Perception – Play Time! (Part Two)

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In this second experiment in which prose is turned to poetry, I have used a headline and the first few sentences of a newspaper article.

Brazen Armed Robbery

 Just before closing yesterday, a group of armed men stormed a grocery store and held up the manager and staff at gunpoint. A few terrified shoppers managed to run for cover as shots volleyed through the store.

 Just before closing yesterday, a group of armed men stormed a grocery store and held up the manager and staff at gunpoint. A few terrified shoppers managed to run for cover as shots volleyed through the store.

Brazen Armed Robbery

Just before closing yesterday,

a group of armed men

stormed a grocery store

and held up the manager

and staff at gunpoint.

A few terrified shoppers

managed to

run for cover

as shots

volleyed

through the store.

Which one is more likely to impact on a reader? The two poems that resulted from the prose passages ( See ‘Part One’ for the first.) are not great works of poetry, but hopefully help to illustrate the idea that writers need to be playful explorers if they wish to sharpen the skills required to become a successful communicator.

Happy writing.

Andrew Pender-Smith

 

EQ? IQ? You Got de Best in You

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Sebastian de Vervet, a JUMPY MONKEY if ever there is one, has written two poems on his favourite subject: CREATIVITY. More particularly, he encourages you to take a brave leap into creative action.

EQ? IQ? You Got de Best in You.

Sebastian de Green Monkee

says to you and you and you:

You can hop right here.

You can hop right dere.

In your imagination,

you can hop anywhere.

Jus get that ‘I can go anywhere’ feeling

an you will be inside de mind

of any character you’re creating.

Visualise, my friend. Visualise.

An what you got five senses for?

Why to use, of course, to use.

Be de traveller.

Do some exploring.

EQ? IQ? You have dem both.

Paint de picture. Write de poem.

Tell de story like it is.

Sing de song. Dance de dance.

De true artist waits for no one.

Now, go an have some

real creative fun.

                              Sebastian de Vervet

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Don Fear to Fly

Yo Bro,

Dis is called going

where others fear to fly.

Take de main chance.

Be jus like dis butterfly.

Have creative courage, my friend.

Don paint yourself into no corner.

No Kidding.

Go flying!

From Sebastian de Vervet, de one who’s never afraid to jump or leap. ”You bros, I can be here, I can be dere, I can be everywhere. As one of my favourite bloggers, Prakash Helgade, likes to say – Happiness!

 

 

 

 

Feel de Breeze

 

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Feel de Breeze

When it comes to creativity,

don be shy –

swing through de trees

an feel de breeze.

Let go, my friend, let go.

Jump high!

Explore de highways

an de byways.

Get a feel for dis and dat.

Do your ting

by jus exploring.

Feel de way.

Tink de way.

Dive deep, my friend.

Fly high.

Know de waters

an de sky.

De mind must flow.

So, yo bro, yo,

take wing.

Learn to really swing.

Let go. Let go!

Let your body shake.

Feel de riddum.

Get de mind to dance.

Pick up your feet.

Clap your hands.

Now you’ve got de new partner.

It’s called CREATIVITY.

Now, my friend, you’re really free.

Sebastian de Vervet

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